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Kaerui Myurri
Spirit of the Depths
Spirit of the Depths
Kaerui Myurri


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PostSubject: Kaerui's Story   Kaerui's Story Icon_minitime1August 6th 2009, 3:36 am

Name: Kaerui Tai Myurri
Age: 14

[center]My story started as far as I can remember which starts back when I was three.

In my clan we have a very special bloodline because the bloodline is developed extremely rarely because one, only women develop it and two, because only one of every five develop chakra systems. Those of our clan who develop chakra systems are known as hybrids. This means we developed our mothers traits for both the bloodline and her chakra system, but that's where another problem comes in when a women gives birth in our village and they have a daughter who gets a substantial chakra system the mother loses her chakra system later in time usually a year later, which makes having strong kunoichi in our clan even more rare because without a mother or father who can teach them of their bloodline they must learn of it on their own.

In my story a lot of these laws were broken which left my clan in shock and shambles. When I was born I was one of three triplet sisters. Surprisingly all three of us developed chakra systems and my mother kept hers. This seemed like a blessing but it was just the opposite. Shortly after word got out we moved out of the village after thousands of ninja scientists tried to perform tests on my mother, my sisters, and me. Even more surprisingly five years later my mother kept her chakra system so she took this gift and vigorously trained me and my sister. Of coarse we all developed differently. My first sister had blond hair and was what was seemingly equal to my power although she was proven the weakest of the three of us this was Keria. Next was Sanitoro the strongest of the three of us she had blue hair and was very dull. Lastly there was me who grew at a steady rate the middle kid I was the one with brown hair and I was my mothers favorite. Later on in the year we found that Sanitoro didn't develop our clan’s bloodline, but she had developed our fathers which changed a lot. After this was found out about she stopped training with our mother, and the other two of us. She began training with our father.

Two year passed and that's when our seemingly peaceful life changed and it would never be the same. One very sunny afternoon our mother fainted while talking to me out in the garden. It was later discovered that she had a terminal disease that was responsible for her not having lost her chakra system. We knew that bringing her to a doctor was just going to result in her being tested on but we decided to do it anyway. As we were walking out of the door to go get help we were stopped by a strange man. He told us that he knew what was happening and he could help so we believed him and took him into our house and let him perform operations on my mother. Later on an army surrounded our house we were all shocked at what was happening and a lot confused. Then in my mother room where we were told she was resting a scream came raging out of her room. As we all came running in we saw the guy who came to help my mother standing over her laughing he then began to speak to us " it's been done I have found a cure for our clans problems ". At this moment our father was outside taking on the army which he quickly died from. The doctor then ran out and began to round up his army and leave with the serum Sanitoro quickly followed them. Keria fainted, and I quickly ran over to my mother. When I got to her she was barely breathing I couldn't speak because I knew what was happening. She began to speak to me in a very low tone " Kaerui (cough) ...... is that you I want you to take this “she hands me a pendant” protect it with your life (cough) I won't be with you to see you grow up but (cough) with this I'll always be with you (hard cough)". Still stunned by what has just happened I take the pendant, and put it on .I then sit and watch my mother goes, as the house is slowly burning until my previously fainted sister walks to me and says "she's gone and we must get out of here " .She then grabs me and carries me out of the house, of coarse I try and fight her because I'd like to see the last of my mother but she doesn't let go of me. I'll never forget the last sight of her lying in the bed. Moments later the house falls down and eventually burns out. I a year later Karia looses her chakra system and goes off in search of Sanitoro she orders me to stay in the village we were at but I got burned down shortly after she left. I then ran to a village known as the village hidden in the depths I don't know if I’ll ever see my sisters again but i hope i do until then i will start a new life at the depths and train to become stronger
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Linnea Redhunt

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PostSubject: Re: Kaerui's Story   Kaerui's Story Icon_minitime1August 6th 2009, 10:34 pm

......My head hurts.
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Linnea Redhunt

Linnea Redhunt


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PostSubject: Re: Kaerui's Story   Kaerui's Story Icon_minitime1August 6th 2009, 10:44 pm

Okay sorry. Lemme rephrase this to not sound unhelpful. It sounds like you have some good ideas here. A bit clique, but ideas nonetheless. What you have to work on are RUN ONS and knowing where to put your periods and your commas. Believe in commas, girl, believe in em, you can do it. Remember, capitalizing isn't everything if your grammar isn't helping your work. If anything, go and ask for help over at The Academy, in the Midpoint section back at the portal.

God speed, young lady. God speed.
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