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 The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet

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Artery Vessel

Artery Vessel


Posts : 324
Age : 32
Village of Residence : The Kingdom of Chaos
Join date : 2010-12-23
Cool Points (LOL) : 3
Hobbies / Interests : Eating Cookies
Kekkei Genkai : Ketsueki-sutairu

Character sheet
Character Race: Black
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PostSubject: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet   The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet Icon_minitime1December 27th 2010, 5:30 pm

Chakra Control: 22%
Lighting Mastery:0%
Water Mastery: 24%
Wind Mastery: 0%
Darkness Mastery: 0%
Fire Mastery:
Keikei-Genkai:21%
Taijustu Mastery: 20%
Ninjustu Mastery: 23%
Genjustu Mastery: 5%

Chakra pool: average



Be well aware that Vessel is very skilled in using swordmenship and gunmenship Can combat hand to hand, but doenst use it most of the time because it does not really fit with his ninjustu technique.



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Nathan

Nathan


Posts : 993
Age : 32
Village of Residence : Village Hidden In The Dusk
Join date : 2009-06-16
Cool Points (LOL) : 5
Kekkei Genkai : Tamashii Okami

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Character Race: Lycan
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PostSubject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet   The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet Icon_minitime1December 27th 2010, 11:03 pm

Hey Artery you need to seriously tone down this rap sheet cause your giving yourself too much power to start at your current rank. You just started out here and giving your self this high percentage from the jump gives you no room for improvement or anything to work on. I'm going to give a template of how a genin rap sheet should look like.

Trey Hyuuga wrote:
Trey
Main elements
Fire Mastery:0
Lightning mastery:12
Wind Mastery:0
Water Mastery:0
Darkness mastery:0
Earth mastery:0
Light mastery:12
Sound Mastery:0
Psychic Mastery:0

Chakras average

Chakra control: above average (I'm partial Hyuuga)
Chakra pool: average
Spiritual Pressure:none
Furyoku:none
Ninja Arts:spell jutsu, holy jutsu,
Kekkei Genkai Mastery: 20%
Taijutsu mastery: 0%
Genjutsu mastery: 0%
Ninjutsu mastery: 11%
Weapon Mastery: 27%
Amount of Speed: C

Now look at yours and look at his. See how he gave him self a reasonable numbers to start out with and just didnt give him self high numbers like you did? So if you would could you follow this template and tone down yours so it looks like something like this .
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Shiro Kazuma

Shiro Kazuma


Posts : 1083
Age : 34
Village of Residence : Kingdom of Chaos
Join date : 2009-05-12
Cool Points (LOL) : 9
Kekkei Genkai : Elemental Control

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PostSubject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet   The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet Icon_minitime1December 28th 2010, 12:26 am

Uhmmm... Just to add on to what Nathan said... There is a Rubric on how this Sheet is supposed to be set, for Zeik gave clear instructions on how each rank limits should be posted. Not hard... Don't be lazy please.... Do ya homework before posting... just saying... So... yea... Read the Topic that says RUBRIC... Thanks. <..>
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Artery Vessel

Artery Vessel


Posts : 324
Age : 32
Village of Residence : The Kingdom of Chaos
Join date : 2010-12-23
Cool Points (LOL) : 3
Hobbies / Interests : Eating Cookies
Kekkei Genkai : Ketsueki-sutairu

Character sheet
Character Race: Black
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PostSubject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet   The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet Icon_minitime1December 28th 2010, 3:52 pm

Please excuse that. I wa looking at someone else's file and got carried away. I hope this is better
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Shiro Kazuma

Shiro Kazuma


Posts : 1083
Age : 34
Village of Residence : Kingdom of Chaos
Join date : 2009-05-12
Cool Points (LOL) : 9
Kekkei Genkai : Elemental Control

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PostSubject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet   The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet Icon_minitime1December 28th 2010, 4:19 pm

Now that more I like it... But kinda small range dont chya think? Lol. Anyways,,, Good To Go...
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