Artery Vessel
Posts : 324 Age : 32 Village of Residence : The Kingdom of Chaos Join date : 2010-12-23 Cool Points (LOL) : 3 Hobbies / Interests : Eating Cookies Kekkei Genkai : Ketsueki-sutairu
Character sheet Character Race: Black Character Info (Highlight):
| Subject: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet December 27th 2010, 5:30 pm | |
| Chakra Control: 22% Lighting Mastery:0% Water Mastery: 24% Wind Mastery: 0% Darkness Mastery: 0% Fire Mastery: Keikei-Genkai:21% Taijustu Mastery: 20% Ninjustu Mastery: 23% Genjustu Mastery: 5%
Chakra pool: average
Be well aware that Vessel is very skilled in using swordmenship and gunmenship Can combat hand to hand, but doenst use it most of the time because it does not really fit with his ninjustu technique.
Artery Vessel Files: Complete
Last edited by Artery Vessel on February 16th 2011, 4:29 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
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Nathan
Posts : 993 Age : 32 Village of Residence : Village Hidden In The Dusk Join date : 2009-06-16 Cool Points (LOL) : 5 Kekkei Genkai : Tamashii Okami
Character sheet Character Race: Lycan Character Info (Highlight):
| Subject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet December 27th 2010, 11:03 pm | |
| Hey Artery you need to seriously tone down this rap sheet cause your giving yourself too much power to start at your current rank. You just started out here and giving your self this high percentage from the jump gives you no room for improvement or anything to work on. I'm going to give a template of how a genin rap sheet should look like. - Trey Hyuuga wrote:
- Trey
Main elements Fire Mastery:0 Lightning mastery:12 Wind Mastery:0 Water Mastery:0 Darkness mastery:0 Earth mastery:0 Light mastery:12 Sound Mastery:0 Psychic Mastery:0
Chakras average
Chakra control: above average (I'm partial Hyuuga) Chakra pool: average Spiritual Pressure:none Furyoku:none Ninja Arts:spell jutsu, holy jutsu, Kekkei Genkai Mastery: 20% Taijutsu mastery: 0% Genjutsu mastery: 0% Ninjutsu mastery: 11% Weapon Mastery: 27% Amount of Speed: C Now look at yours and look at his. See how he gave him self a reasonable numbers to start out with and just didnt give him self high numbers like you did? So if you would could you follow this template and tone down yours so it looks like something like this . | |
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Shiro Kazuma
Posts : 1083 Age : 34 Village of Residence : Kingdom of Chaos Join date : 2009-05-12 Cool Points (LOL) : 9 Kekkei Genkai : Elemental Control
Character sheet Character Race: Character Info (Highlight):
| Subject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet December 28th 2010, 12:26 am | |
| Uhmmm... Just to add on to what Nathan said... There is a Rubric on how this Sheet is supposed to be set, for Zeik gave clear instructions on how each rank limits should be posted. Not hard... Don't be lazy please.... Do ya homework before posting... just saying... So... yea... Read the Topic that says RUBRIC... Thanks. <..> | |
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Artery Vessel
Posts : 324 Age : 32 Village of Residence : The Kingdom of Chaos Join date : 2010-12-23 Cool Points (LOL) : 3 Hobbies / Interests : Eating Cookies Kekkei Genkai : Ketsueki-sutairu
Character sheet Character Race: Black Character Info (Highlight):
| Subject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet December 28th 2010, 3:52 pm | |
| Please excuse that. I wa looking at someone else's file and got carried away. I hope this is better | |
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Shiro Kazuma
Posts : 1083 Age : 34 Village of Residence : Kingdom of Chaos Join date : 2009-05-12 Cool Points (LOL) : 9 Kekkei Genkai : Elemental Control
Character sheet Character Race: Character Info (Highlight):
| Subject: Re: The Genin Files: Artery Vessel Rap Sheet December 28th 2010, 4:19 pm | |
| Now that more I like it... But kinda small range dont chya think? Lol. Anyways,,, Good To Go... | |
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