zach hyuga's bio

Name:zach hyuga

Age:7

Bio: Zach was born from two Hyuga's in the kingdom of chaos. His mother and father were two of the most successful ninja out of all the shinobi. They were killed when Zach was three years old. Zach missed them, even though they never had time for him. Zach Trained and trained, wanting to avenge his parents. He ran away from home at the age of 5, because he thought he would be able to train harder and get more results with different experiences. He wanted to make his parents proud by becoming a kage.

Uhhh... Rewrite this please.... Like every bit of it... It's like nobody can even follow the story...

Zach huga wrote:

Name:zach huga

Age:7

Bio:zach lived a fairly nomal life, untill one fatefull day when ombu black ops attacked his village. his family and friends fought he was extreamly scared so he hid in his parents secreat celler behind his house. all of his clan was killed exept him. he then came out thee days later only one ninja was left he then snuck into the training room and sees a acient scroll thenhe opens it and finds all the most powerfull jutsu. he then came out side and killed the ninja and went on a hunt to kill the rest of the ninja who destroyed his village.

Ahem. Mayumi time.

Name: Zach Hyuga

Age: 7 (?)

Bio: Zach lived a fairly nomal life, until one fateful day the Anbu Black Ops attacked his village. His family and friends fought while Zach, extremely scared, hid in his parents secret celler behind the house. All of his clan was killed except him. Three days later, he emerged. Only one enemy ninja was left, which allowed him to sneak into the training room. Zach noticed an ancient scroll in the corner. Curious, as most little boys are, he then opens it to find some quite powerfull jutsu. He only understood a few of them, but it was enough. He then went outside and killed the ninja in a sort of stealthy ambush. It was pure luck that he managed it. Confident now, Zach is now on a hunt to kill the rest of the ninja who destroyed his village.

Or not.