Yo Khrona New Fish to fry

as tyru steps back he uses freezin water wave:makes a huge wave of water which freezes any enemy's,and cannot hurt the user

(Um... Riiiight... I'm gonna tell you this right now so we can get this clear. Nothing can be undodgeable and unblockable or unbreakable. At least, not here. There is never a guarantee that your attacks will hit. There is never a guarantee that your attacks will hold up. There is never a guarantee that someone can't break through whatever you have. Plus, you have no rank here at the moment. You do not decide whether something is unblockable or undodgeable. WE do. So. All I have to say is... Fix it. Now. Kay?)

ok srry chroma tyru says with a embarassed look on his face im new so i wouldnt know

(It's fine. No damage done. Just as long as it's fixed and doesn't happen again. Also, remember to use the parentheses whenever you are not talking in character.)

The Shadow would quickly disappear, appearing behind the wave and pointed its floating hands at Tyru, below. It would use its Ice Dance, making giant needles of ice appear nonstop and fall on Tyru at a high speed.

(ok) tyru quikly uses heat wave:which gives me the ability to control my targets movements for 3 turns also mealting any objects around me

(Oh, also, if you haven't already, you might wanna edit your powers and stuff... And try to be more descriptive in your posts so people will know what's going on. Look at my posts for examples.)

Because of the Shadow's adept abilities in controlling fire, the Heat Wave would not be able to take control of it. However, the ice shot at Tyru would have melted because of it. To quickly retaliate, the Shadow used Light Dance, making huge explosions of light in front of it all across the ground in Tyru's general direction, hoping to blind him and harm him with the explosive light.

(ok) *as the blinding flash hits tyru he falls not knowing he cant see gets up and OPENS his eyes and says* wat i cant see!?!?!? then tyru would earth blast at full power:(breaks all earth around user and hits all nearby targets) to break the ground around him then he would use then uses elemental clone jutsu(to create 6 copies of me in elemental form) which can see for me.then i would use freezin water wave:(makes a huge wave of water which freezes any enemies around me) to blast my enemy to the ground and puts out his fire.

(That's a lot better, now just try to incorporate it all into one, flowing post, like so...)

The Shadow, aware of the oncoming attacks, would once again disappear and wait for the attacks to pass before reappearing again. It would seem as though Tyru would have to find a way to get around the Shadow's disappearing ability if he wishes to defeat it. The Shadow was also well aware of the main body of Tyru, and as such, it figured that if the main body was attacked, the elemental clones would disappear. Fire magic and ice magic started to cluster in the floating hands of the Shadow, and the magics would fuse together and float into the air, creating Fire and Ice, a freezing and melting attack all at the same time. The Shadow would fling the Fire and Ice down upon Tyru's main body, the Fire and Ice making a grand, icy and fiery explosion that should freeze and melt whatever was in its way in that explosion.

tyru would then move around with his clones to confuse the shadow 1 from behind 1 in front 1 from the left 1 from the right and they all grab the shadow so anywhere the shadow goes each clone kicks the shadow in the head .each of my clones kick the shadow in the head 5 more times tyru then uses freezin water wave at full power(which makes a huge wave of water which freezes any enemies around me at 360 degrees) to put out the shadows fire and freeze him. *tyru thinks to himselfthis is a fight i cant win i am not worthy to become part of the village as he walks away*

(Yet, another problem. What you did there is what we call an 'autohit.' You cannot TELL someone what has happened. You cannot hit them without knowing what they did first, and you cannot hit them automatically. They might have some way to get out of it. It's not a fair fight if you don't give them a chance to escape. So. Fix it.)

well i guess its over now ether i get killed or i fight but this is a fight i cant win.tyru says to chroma srry for wasting ur time chroma he says with a dissapointed look on his face

Chroma scoffed as the Shadow reappears near her "You're just going to give up? Hmph. I knew you were pathetic." Chroma would extend a sword from her hand and slay the Shadow in one swift movement, absorbing its soul as well. "Go train somewhere, or something before you come back here." With that, she would be off.

I WILL BE BACK TO SLAY THAT MONSTER!!!!!! BUT I JUST HAVE ONE QUESTIONCAN U EARN ANY RANK BY TRAINING

Chroma yawned "Eh? Mmmm... I guess. Why not try another village, or something? Maybe they'll take you. If not, you can always come back and try agaaaain~! We have loooads of monsters..."